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Lovers and the Freind: Proloug

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In a the middle of a town there was a house, just a normal house nothing abnormal, outside lush grass, good windows, an average size house with two windows in front, a door as well (duh), and with a navy blue coloring from the roof to the bottom, but inside was a different story. Inside the house was a techno-haven to some, but enough to make a normal person to get technophobic, all around the house there were connections, one connected to the internet, the other to the satellite dish, another was to something that looked like it was connected to a freezing chamber, and lots and lots of power cords. To tell you the truth this is only the living room if you can imagine the rest of the house like this (other than the bathroom and kitchen cause as you know that's a safety hazard) then there's no need to describe the rest of the rooms. Now all this technology belonged to one teenager called Raiteck Lived, now this teenager was a genius, hence the wires all over inside the house, the thing was he didn't have a family to share his achievements with.
       
As a boy at 5 years old he lost both his parents in a car accident, what happened was that his parents were certified CIA agents and captured (and killed when needed) many enemies which in turn made them targets of many people however, none of those people ever did anything to them, until one day, the family was coming back from a party that was quite far from home and in order to go back there was only one road to take them back. This road was a two way road but only one car could drive in each lane not side by side, it was really late around 10 to 11 o' clock and the whole family was in the car. Raiteck was in the back sleeping in the middle of the car with his head on his brother's booster seat which was near the right window. His mother and father were in the front and his dad was driving, everything was going fine until suddenly out of nowhere a black car with no lights on was speeding straight for them. Before the mother could yell, "LOOK OUT!" it was too late and they both collided with an earsplitting CRASH!! At that moment if everything was in slow motion this is what happened step by step to Raiteck. He woke up immediately to the crash, at that moment the front window broke sending millions of glass shards backwards towards him and his brother, out of instinct he got in front of his brother and many shards hit him but the most deadly ones were three shards which gashed him deeply in the left eye. With this his left eye started to bleed uncontrollably and he yelled a yell that would make even the strongest man tremble with fear and then everything stopped.

At that moment Raiteck, after yelling from the pain, shook his mother and father saying, "Mommy? Daddy?" the mother didn't move but the dad groaned and opened his eyes slowly and saw what happened and also saw what would happen next. He told Raiteck what to do, but every breath he took was painful so he spoke slowly, "Son these will be... the most important instructions... that I am about to give you... so listen closely,"  "ok," the little boy said with a tear welling up in his good eye. "I need you... to unbuckle your little brother.... and then get him out of the car..... After that run away from the car.... till you get to the house..... Where the party was and.... tell them what happened.... and whatever you do... don't look back.... even if you hear something big happening... don't look back.... understand? Now go." "B-But what about mommy and daddy, aren't you going to come with me?" Raiteck was ready to start crying but the father smiled sweetly and said "Don't worry… daddy and mommy… will always be with you," "That's right," said a feminine voice. Raiteck saw his mother smiling at him, even though she was in very bad condition, she had enough strength to show a smile "Don't worry honey we'll always be with you even in the scariest of moments... now hurry, get your brother and do as your father says." With that Raiteck did everything his father said and ran for his life, in the car the father and mother looked into each other's eyes and the father said, "Well looks like.... this is the end." "No," said the mother "this is actually the beginning," they both smiled at each other, held hands, and each said I love you to the other and with that the car blew up in a big explosion. Raiteck knew he wasn't supposed to look back like his father told him, but as soon as he heard that giant explosion he stopped and turned and saw the mushroom shaped flames go up and then after seeing that his baby brother started to cry. Raiteck's eye started to well up with tears, but he did not yell or make a sound he just let his eye cry and then he hugged his brother tenderly and left for the house. In the end they never found the culprit and both boys went to the orphanage.

At the orphanage he studied hard in order to not lose his brother because he knew in order to gain custody you need to be 18 years in older to gain custody of a family member not before. So with all the studying he did at the age of 6 he knew all multiplication tables, at age 7 he knew how to speak to any adult in the world in any language, at 8 he knew how to use all electronics, 9 he knew how to fight in any danger, and 10 he pretty much figured out the rest of life as we knew it but kept that a secret. Sad to say though at the age of ten his younger brother, who was five, was adopted by another family he tried with all his might to not let his brother go, but he was not at the age to claim custody of his younger brother. Eventually he became 18 years old, graduated high school, and was already in a good paying job that he never had to leave his home. Now some of you may wonder that with all that brain power how didn't he graduate earlier, well to tell you the truth that was his seventh time graduating the reason for that was because he was so bored doing nothing at home that he went back to school just for the fun of it. At school though they called him a freak and many other things because for one thing his left eye healed and he could see perfectly, but the scars on his face were still there. People heard what happened and felt sorry for him at first seeing him with the eye patch and all, but when they took it off and he could still see some said it was a miracle others said for that to happen he had to be a freak of nature.
Ok well i am going to try and make a shadamy story with a character that i created on my own this is just the prolouge so it's just the story behind my character the next chapter will start to get into the story of shadamy. Oh and tell me how i did i really would appreciate the opinions on how it is what i need to work on and also if it's any good to say the least. THANK YOU!!! ^_^

Chapter One: [link]

All this i made up on my own except the name Star Treck that is not mine
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bloodyflowerrose's avatar
this is so cool so far!